There once was a boy who played baseball,
who was fond of his Barbie’s and dolls.
During practice one day,
in center field he lay,
he got knocked in the head with a ball.
About Me
- Mr. B-G
- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
4 comments:
Joe, i liked your poem a lot. i remember when shower got hit in the face with the ball, that was really funny. the poem has a nice flow to it and i like the rhyming words you chose. i think your title could have been a little cooler than "silly" but it was still a nice poem.
Joe, your poem reminded me alot about you and how your silly pathetic at baseball. Like that homerun you gave up. Just kidding I didnt really care I kinda laughed. But yeah good poem I thought you used a very good rhyme scheme and it was a funnny mood. I laughed out loud if you ask me. Yeah I agree with connor silly is a queer title you should of said something like "this happens when I play baseball" or "what happens when I make an attempt at athletics". Just kidding your money I love you homie. Good poem though I think the theme was pay attention and stuff like that. Great Job son
Joe, your poem was really good. I think you might be describing yourself in it. I liked the rhyme scheme and thought it was fairly humorous. The poem was good but the title didn't really fit well. Good poem.
Joe, your poem is very good. I think the theme of the poem is if u suck at sports, then you shouldn't play them, but obviuosly shower doesnt get that. you used a nice rhyme scheme and it was a funny mood. Your had a silly title that didnt really fit your poem but that is ok.
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