Thursday, March 20, 2008

Setting by Phil M.

In every book the setting plays an important role in the story. They are sometimes deadly and sometimes the setting might even save the characters life. In the Old Man and The Sea the setting does both. The setting, the ocean, saves the old man, Santiago, but at the same time it kills him. It saves him by feeding him, and giving him something to do, but it kills him because the sea is very dangerous and also the marlin nearly kills him.

The ocean saves Santiago’s life by letting him catch the fish and make money, also because he could eat the fish. Santiago could sell the fish for money but it could also give him money and something to eat. If he didn’t have the sea I think it is easy to say he would die. The ocean also saved him by letting him do something. I think that was the main reason for him to wake up every morning. He was an old man who couldn’t afford to retire and was forced to spend his days on the dangerous sea. He had no one to talk to: “He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty- four days now without taking a fish” (1).

In the way the sea saved him it killed him. It’s very dangerous because of the sharks and the currents. You could be sent out in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean and you wouldn’t even know it. At one point Santiago couldn’t even see the land. He was moving closer and closer to his death. He wasn’t scared and didn’t even care at all. “The glow of Havana was not so strong, so that he knew the current must be carrying them eastward” (47). He said this with no emotion which shows that he was expecting it.

Another part of the sea that almost kills Santiago is the big fish. Being an older man he doesn’t have the kind of strength a younger man does. Also he doesn’t have good fishing gear; he is poor so he can only afford certain things. The marlin is a very big fish that was killing Santiago just as much as he was killing the marlin. “You are felling it now fish and god know that I am” (56). This shows how much he is fighting the fish and how the fish is killing him at the same time Santiago is killing the marlin. Santiago eventually kills the marlin but the sharks come from further out in the ocean and they eat the marlin. Santiago thinks he did all that work for nothing, so he thinks he was defeated.

Santiago all and all might have been defeated but that did not get him down. But it meant a lot to him because he caught the monster of a fish, and he had the bones to show for it. As they say you can win a battle but not the war. It is just the opposite for Santiago. The sea won the battle but Santiago won the war because he caught the huge fish that no one wanted him to and everyone thought he was great after that. He then went into a deep sleep and that is when the book ends.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Phil,
I liked your essay alot. I didn't get a chance to read a setting essay yet and it was interesting. I think the thesis is that even if you don't accomplish what you want but you have something to show for it then you succeded.
“He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty- four days now without taking a fish”. I like this qoute because it shows that the old man is still trying to fish even though he doesn't catch anything.
I like the description in this essay and the thesis. You explain the need for setting in a well manner. Also you have good description too.
I don't have any advice really. Nice essay!

Anonymous said...

Phil,
I liked your essay. It was very descriptive and well written. Your thesis is clearly setting. My favorite paragraph is the second one because it was filled of detail and examples of why the quote fit that thesis. My favorite quote was “The glow of Havana was not so strong, so that he knew the current must be carrying them eastward” (47). Santiago used his knowledge of thesea to help him ion his journey. I really wouldn't change anything. Great Job!

Anonymous said...

Phil,
i liked you essay! it was really god. your thesis statement was nice and clear, and was stated well in your first paragraph.My favorite paragraph was the last paragraph. It really summed up yuor essay perfectly. My favorite quote was “The glow of Havana was not so strong, so that he knew the current must be carrying them eastward” (47). THis quoite really shows how wellt hey old man knows the the sea nad how it helps him catch the ,marlin and find his way back home. i thought you did a great job. Setting seemed like a hard topic, but you covered it well. Great Job!

Anonymous said...

Hey phil,
I liked your essay very much. Your thesis clearly explained and introduced the main point of your essay.
The quotes were well integrated into the paragraphs and gave plenty of detail towards the topic.
My favorite part was the concluding paragraph, there was a lot of detail and it summed up the story nicely.
I dont have any advice, your essay was pretty well written.

Anonymous said...

Phil,
I liked your essay. I think it was well written and used pretty good vocabulary. I think you accurately described the setting.
the best quote was the second one: “The glow of Havana was not so strong, so that he knew the current must be carrying them eastward” (47). That was a good quote because it described where Santiago was at the time and that he was in danger of becoming lost at sea. However, Santiago's knowledge of the sea prevented that from happening. I didn't see any problems. Good job.

Anonymous said...

Phil nice job on your essay. i think the thesis statement was very clear and explained what the essay was goign to be about. my favorite paragraph was the first because it talked about teh good thingsg of the sea. my favorite quote was the one with him in the skiff.“He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty- four days now without taking a fish”. i liked this one because i thought you made it work into the story very well. one thing i would advise you to do next time would to check and reread your work for misspellings and such. otherwise great job!

Anonymous said...

Good job Phil.
Your thesis was very clear and focused into one sentence. It was very engaging. Your third quote was the strongest and most relevant to your essay, even though there was a typo in it. "You are felling it now fish and god know that I am". I thought that your writing was well-organized and you defended your thesis well. Next time I would try to improve your descriptive words and check more thoroughly for spelling and grammar mistakes. Excellent essay!

Anonymous said...

phil,
good job! i liked your essay! i thought your thesis was really clear- "The setting, the ocean, saves the old man, Santiago, but at the same time it kills him."
i think your best quote was probably “The glow of Havana was not so strong, so that he knew the current must be carrying them eastward” (47) it really showed how well the old man knew the sea.
i think you did really well with description in your essay. i dont really have any advice, so, great job phil!!