Thursday, March 20, 2008

A Struggle for Life by Martha H.


In The Old Man and the Sea, the main character, Santiago, encounters many different obstacles that he must conquer or be faced with dire consequences. Santiago’s disputes begin when he manages to snag a marlin that is to amble and durable to reel in. Instead of giving up and letting the marlin go, Santiago stays with the massive fish and is carried further and further out to sea. With a short supply of food, loss of body movement, and the struggle with the loneliness of the sea, the walls begin to close in on Santiago. As the problems continue to pile up, Santiago’s strength begins to weaken.

A little while after the fish is caught, the first struggle inaugurates. Santiago begins to feel weaker and he gets a cramp that creeps into his hand. Santiago goes to great lengths to take care of his hands and does whatever it takes to ensure they stay healthy and strong for him. The relation between the old man and his hands is shown in the quote, "‘How do you feel hand, I’ll eat some more for you’" (58, 59) Santiago explains how he’ll eat unpleasant fish such as dolphins to gain strength in his body and hands to maintain a good hold on the marlin.

Soon after, Santiago discovers that the small amount he ate wasn’t enough to corroborate his body. With the extremely unlucky streak the old man encountered, he was unprepared for a voluminous catch such as the marlin. Without another source of food, Santiago knew he would soon die of starvation. As a result, Santiago looks to catch more diminutive fish to eat. Although his body is weakening, his mind stays sharp but he knew that wouldn’t last much longer. An example of his determination and clear headed thoughts was when Santiago looked down into the dark water at the slant of the line and thought, "Eat now and it will strengthen the hand. It is not your hand’s fault and you have been many hours with the fish. But you can stay with him forever. Eat the bonito now." (58)

With nothing but the ocean surrounding him, Santiago quickly begins to feel the emptiness of being alone. While he usually has the boy as company, Santiago deals with the struggle of surviving without him. The boy who was his son, his friend, his brother, his partner, was now an extensive distance away and had no way of helping Santiago. The hollowness and loneliness Santiago feels is suggested by his thoughts continually drifting towards him thinking, "I wish I had the boy to help me and see this." (48) This quote shows the dependency he has on the boy. Without him, he was enabled time to sleep, Santiago’s strength warred away more easily, and he had to maneuver through every obstacle by himself without any back up.

Throughout his many grapples, Santiago’s decision to stay with the abundant marlin affected him physically and mentally. Throughout each brawl, such as the short supply of food, loss of body movement, and dwelling with loneliness, Santiago had to overcome all in order to maintain survival. One simple day of fishing in the sea turned out to be an adventure that made Santiago struggle for his life.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Martha,
I thought your story was great. your thesis statement was very clear and understanding. you had great vocabulary throughout the entire story. also i really liked the quote you used in the paragraph about Santiago's hand. all your paragraphs were filled with great vocabulary and really good detail. all in all you did a great job Martha.

Anonymous said...

Martha,
your thesis statement clearly informs the reader that the main character faced many challenging obstacles. you have an incredibly large use of vocabulary throughout your story, and that's one really strong piece of your writing. You used a lot of detail to make sure the reader knew what you were talking about, and it was always exciting to find out what you were going to say next. Overall, you did an amazing job writing your essay, and it was exciting to read.

Anonymous said...

Martha,
Great job! Your thesis statement “In the Old Man and the Sea, the main character, Santiago, encounters many different obstacles that he must conquer or be faced with dire consequences” got me really interested. I think the strongest part of your essay was your unique vocabulary. You also picked very good quotes to support your paragraphs. One thing I would suggest is to not end a supporting paragraph with a quote. I really enjoyed reading your essay you did a really nice job.

Anonymous said...

martha,
your thesis statement was very clear and easy to understand. one thing that really stood out to me was your vacabulary. your expanded vocabulary constibuted a lot to the story. i liked your first quote the best because it showed the struggle between santiago and his hand, but it also showed Santiago's character. next time, consider is remembering to start and end paragaphs with your own thoughts and ideas.
your essay was terrific and well-written.

Anonymous said...

Hey Martha, nice job.
Your thesis statement was very clear and showed how Santiago faced many challenges. I liked the first quote the most because it was incorporated very well and showed how Santiago had problems with his hand, and you can also see how he was becoming lonely because he was talking to himself.
You used a lot of detail, and I think that's what worked best.
I think maybe next time don't end paragraphs with a quote, but other than that it was very well written.

Anonymous said...

oh hey marthaa,
your story was amazing! I thought your thesis statement was very clear and strong. You really got the reader interested i thought you vocabulary was great throughout the story. Your strongest paragraph would be the one where he is talking to his hand, i thought it was funny. overall you did great as usual and i think its flawless so i have no suggestions for next time. GOOD JOB!

Anonymous said...

Dear Marta,
What a great essay, I enjoyed reading it very much. I was pulled into the story by the great thesis statement. The topics you picked to elaborate on were good choices. The vocab went way over my head and I struggled to keep up with the professional quality of your essay. The words grapple, inaugurate, and another one that I forget were way out of my league. The quote you used in the paragraph about Santiago's hand had fantastic description and good back up. I like how you began your paragraphs, I felt like it really brought the reader into the story. Keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

Dear Marta,
What a great essay, I enjoyed reading it very much. I was pulled into the story by the great thesis statement. The topics you picked to elaborate on were good choices. The vocab went way over my head and I struggled to keep up with the professional quality of your essay. The words grapple, inaugurate, and another one that I forget were way out of my league. The quote you used in the paragraph about Santiago's hand had fantastic description and good back up. I like how you began your paragraphs, I felt like it really brought the reader into the story. Keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

MARTHA!!!
Hey girl, nice job.
Your thesis statement was very clear and showed how Santiago faced many challenges. I liked the first quote because it was incorporated very well and showed how Santiago had problems with his hand, and you can also see how he was becoming lonely because he was talking to himself.
You used a lot of detail, and I think that's what worked best.
I think maybe next time don't end paragraphs with a quote, but other than that it was very well written.