Thursday, March 20, 2008

Obstacles by Zack G.


Throughout the novella, Santiago has many different obstacles that he has to overcome. His last fishing trip was one of his most challenging experiences. The obstacles that he had to overcome were the fact of being alone, the strength of the marlin, and the lack of food and water. All of these obstacles were working against him, making it very hard for him to even survive out on his trip. Santiago is 85 years old and he still is out in the sea fishing which shows you how determined he was to catch this marlin.

Santiago’s first obstacle that he had to overcome was the fact of being alone. If he had Manolin with him during his last fishing trip I think that he would have caught the marlin a lot faster and he would have been able to successfully bring the marlin onto the boat. At one point in the story Santiago says out loud to himself: “ ‘I wish I had the boy. To help me and to see this’ ” (48). Since he did not have the boy with him he got very tired from the fight with the marlin. He barely got any sleep and he didn’t get much time to rest either. Since Santiago was on his own it made it much harder for him to catch the marlin.

Another obstacle that Santiago had to overcome was the lack of food and water. When Santiago was preparing for the fishing trip he never would have thought that his trip would last as long as it did. He packed some food and a good amount of water, but that proved to not be enough. When Santiago has the marling hooked it was for 3 days long. He had no food left on the third day but just a little bit of water. I know that if he had more food that he would have been in a better condition to catch the marlin and he could have got it to his boat quicker. “For an hour the old man had been seeing black spots before his eyes and the sweat salted his eyes and salted the cut over his eye and on his forehead” (87). He had been very faint and I think this could have been caused by him not having enough water and possibly being dehydrated.

The last obstacle that Santiago had to overcome was the strength of the marlin and the attacks from the vigorous sharks. This was easily the hardest obstacle that Santiago had to face. Santiago had the marlin hooked for several days and he could not reel it in. The marlin had so much power, but the old man was not giving up. Santiago was so determined to catch this marlin he would do anything for it. On about the third day of the marlin being hooked he had the marlin close to his boat and he threw his harpoon at the marlin and killed it. After about an hour a few sharks started appearing and eating the marlin. A few sharks came and Santiago killed some and injured some, but: “One came, finally, against the head itself and he knew that it was over” (118).That shark ate the last piece of the marlin and there was nothing left.

Santiago did his best to try and overcome these obstacles. I don’t think that there was any other way that Santiago could have tried to fight off the sharks.. He did the best he could, but that didn’t help him in the end. Santiago did gain something in his last trip even though he didn’t catch the marlin. He gained a lot of experience and knowledge during his final fishing trip. I think that since he was 85 and he was in very bad condition that he ended up dieing at the end of the book because of the different obstacles he had to try and overcome.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

zak, you thesis statment clearly informs the reader that the main character in this 'novelle' faced many challenging obsticals. your stongest quote was the second one. it showed his physical condition and how that was one of the biggest obsticals he faced. i really like your vocabulary throughtout the story. next time however, i would make your conclusion a little more stronger.

Anonymous said...

Zak,
Nice job on your essay. Your thesis was clear, and most of your body paragraphs were well put together. I agree with what Julia said about your second quote. it nicely fit into the paragraph. You might want to work on your sentence structure because a few of your sentences didn't make sense. your conclusion seemed a bit rushed but other than that, good job.

Anonymous said...

Zak,
you did a great job making your thesis statement clear and you got your point across. i liked your diction and how you incorporated all of your quotes into your essay. the second quote was probably the strongest, as ryan and julia said.the conclusion could have been a little longer but you did a really great job!

Anonymous said...

zak,
good job on your essay! Your thesis statement is very clear and you inform the reader of what is to come in the essay. Your stongest quote was the second one because it fit in smoothly and ver detailed. Something that you could fix would be making the conclusion a little stonger but the rest of your essay was great and i really enjoyed reading it.

Anonymous said...

Zak, great job on your essay. I could easily find your thesis statement and it well informed me on what the essay is about. Your body paragraphs support your essay with specific examples and good quotes. I agree with Julia and Ryan when they said your conclusion isn't great. Your conclusion sums everything up so remember to take your time.

Anonymous said...

Zak,
i think that you did a really good job on your essay. I think that the best part about your essay was the way that you made you quotes fit in your paragraphs. The quotes that you chose also really fit with what you were talking about in the paragraph. I think that you did a relly nice job, but one thing that you could have maybe worked a little harder on was the conclusion. It seemed as though you did work on that as hard as you worked on the rest of the essay. Good Job!

Anonymous said...

Hey Zak,
I think that you did a good job on your essay. I think that the best part about your essay was the way that you made you quotes fit in your paragraphs. The quotes that you chose also complemented what you were talking about in the paragraph. I think that you could have maybe worked a little harder on was the conclusion. It fit in with the rest of the essay.