Brynna is my friend
She’s a funny chick.
She promised to be there until the end
She’s always wearing cool kicks.
She’s pretty smart, when she tries
Otherwise she’s dead.
Brynna even tends to cry
But I just smack her on the head.
She’s the prettiest girl in school
Many people hate
But they’re only jealous because they’re not cool
For Brynna it was just fate.
She’s really, really nice and sweet
She’s is one girl you should totally meet.
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9 comments:
Dora,
I love this poem. Its totally true. I loved your ryhming i thought it was really great. I agree some people are jelous of brynna's beauty haha. I liked how you wrote about one of your friends and made it into a great poem. This poem made me in a funny, happy mood and i think you did an awesome job! love yous byee
NORAA,
I completely agree with this poem. You did an awesome job making everything fluent. It made me feel very happy yet it just reminded me of how lovely Brynna really is which lowered my selfesteem, THANKS. It strangely made me think of Brynna. Niceee workkk!!!!
i really like this poem and i feel like it truley glorifis brynna in every way. it make me feel happy to be your guyses friend and it remindes me of how cool she is, i feel warm and fuzzy wen i read this. i think about when i make fun of brynna for occasionaly dressing like an indian and i like it. i invision hanging out with her and its fun
Noraaa I loved your poem. I like how you explained Brynna and her personality. You were very descriptive and entertaining in your work. Your poem was very cute and spontaneous and it showed very well that you have a strong friendship with beautiful Brynna. Good job! =)(you should have written about geraldine though..)
noraaaaaaaaa!
loved the poem. all i can think of when i read it is brynna who i love. its quite perfect. i really liked how you rhymed and imagery..after reading it i hate brynna because she is so great :)and i think your a great poet!!!<3
This poem had a very happy mood and it was very energetic. i think this poem fits brynna and her personality. It also showed how many people are jealous of brynna. i like the rhytm. You were very descriptive and entertaining in your work. this poem was so good!
you cooool i guesss.
jk totally love youuu. and this poem made me laughhh hahahaaaa
noraa, your poem showed brynnas beauty. It is completly true too. I love it, you did a good job on explaining your friend in a good way and showing how much she means to you. This poem made me happy to read, nice jobbb!
NORA =]
I loved this poem. It was very funny. I like the way it rhymed which made it flow very nicely. I tihnk you should continue to write poetry because you seem really talented.
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