There was a woman at the dentist
Art asked, “Hey please be my apprentice”
She had quickly said yes
Art found she was a mess
She told him she was a hygienist
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- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
6 comments:
Sean, very good limerick. I thought it was simple, made sense, and added a element of humor. While reading it, I could picture this scene actually happening in a dentist's office. Good job.
After reading this poem I feltenjoyable. The poems mood was positive and the poem was somewhat funny. I could easily picture an intern blowing the job. I also thought the ending line was very good where it wraps up the story and explains that the person is a hygeneist.
Mackey i do not like this poem. I don't think that this poem makes sense because hygenists are essential to the dentsl community. You did a nice job rhyming and the pome made me think about going to the dentist. I've read one dentistry poem before about dentists that made me laugh by shel silverstein. This poem makes me think about going to the dentist.
dude matt first of all it does make sense because a dentist and a hygenist are two different dental jobs and are not the same thing at all. So before you criticize get your facts straight.
This poem was very nice and easy to follow. Although it did not really carry to much deap thought, it was a very good limerick. TEh poem really made you visualize what was happening in your head. This poem had a great use of literary techniques. It used rhyme well to move the reader throughout the poem. It also had some good imagery behind it too. After reading this poem I fell a bit more happy because it was kind of funny, but not funny enough to really make you happy. THis poem was very original and I never read anything like this before. Good Poem Sean.
I really enjoyed your limerick Sean. I really like the element of humor you put in the poem with the dentist and hygienist. This poem is very original and unlike any others I have read. It was not very complex but if it was complex it probably would not have been as funny. Your rhyme scheme was also very clever, good job.
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