I have a brother his name is Sam
He likes to eat some green eggs and ham.
He is eight-teen years old
He is smelly like mold
Sam has a best friend that he calls lam.
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- Mr. B-G
- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
5 comments:
At the end of the poem i thought it was a cute poem about your brother. This poem showed how much you love your brother, and i think the details in the poem paint a good picture. After reading this poem it made me happy because it shows that you care about your brother. This poem kind of reminds me of the ode i wrote for my sister.
Abbey Lemanski this poem was adorable. It made me smile and laugh. You did a good job poetically explaining your relationship between you and your brother. Good job =)
Well abbey this poem makes your brother seem like he is a bit unsanitary, saying he smells like mold. i hope thats not the case. But the poem was quit funny and the rhyme worked out well. I could picture your brother being 18 years old sitting down eating eggs with his freind lam smelling like mold. This poem made me feel a bit happy afterwards becuase it was funny. It was a good lymric and keep up the good work.
Abbeyyyy. I thought this poem was very cute. i loved your rhyme scheme and your word choice. It reminded me of dr seuss! this puts me in a realllly happy mood.
loveyouforeverandeverandeverandeverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
bye.
abbeyy this poem was so cute i loved it. showed that you at least somewhat care for that brother of yours. I laughed when I was reading it. I loved you rhyming it made the poem more interesting. GREAT JOB! =)
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