My personality is one of a kind
A girl like me is hard to find
I am outgoing as you can see
And always will be
I laugh a lot a like to have fun
You’ll often find me out in the sun
My love is free
And always will be
Sometimes I don’t blend
But in the end
I am me
And always will be
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Lida, great poem. you should be proud for having written such a good poem. i feel that the theme is that you are who you are and no one can change that. that is a good quality in a person and hard to find. the poem really captivates your personality and expresses it in a way words cant tell. great job
Lida good job!
It seems to me that the theme you are trying to set is be who you are and don't let anyone change that. It's very important to be yourself. It seems like too many people try to be something there not, or try and be someone else. Keep up the good work and i hope to read more of your poetry.
LIDA, i liked your poem a lot your personality is without a doubt one of a kind. i thought your poem was very clever with the words you used to rhyme, it has a nice flow to it. i can confidently say that it's true, a girl like you is very hard to find.
lida
your poem was spectacular. your personality really shined through even besides the fact that it was about you. i could actually picture you saying this. the intended audience was probably directed to anyone who doesnt know you so you could tell them about yourself. you did awesome!
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