Days spent fishing with you
Under a sunny, clear sky
Rocking the New Balance shoes
You were the coolest guy.
Though we caught nothing
Spending time with you was all I did need
You taught me a lot, took me under your wing
Out on the water, feeling like we’d been freed.
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Connor, i think your poem is great. It reminds me of when i use to do things with my grandpa but we never went fishing. I think the mood of this poem is content and relaxed. The attitude you have in this poem is that you are happy.overall you did a really nice job!
conna, great job. this poem really reminds me of when i went fishing one time with my grandpa. Your rhyme scheme was great and the diction couldnt have been better. the mood of the poem is relaxed and enjoyable. nice job man
Hi Connor, sick poem dude. reminds me of the time i spent with my grampa before he moved away. you made me feel relaxed while reading it and made me feel like going out to fish. overall, good poem cutie
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