Little girl, about six
Preparing to go down the water slide.
With every twist and turn of the slide,
She laughs until her belly aches.
Across her body is a florescent bikini
And goggles cover her beautiful hazel eyes.
She’s putting on a show for the people watching her on the deck
But she loves the attention.
All you can see on her face is a big smile.
Just before she hits the water,
She sees a camera flash,
And she sticks her tongue out.
Splash!
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Maddie i really loved your poem. i thought it showed how much you cared about your sister. i think the words were about your sister and you were describing her as in an everday setting. the poem flowed very nicely and i thought you used great word choice. you knew a lot about the subject and i thought that was great. overall i thought it was a very nice poem.
Maddie!
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was so well written and i love how you didn't have any rules throughout your poem. I think that the theme throughout your poem was fun. I think that throughout the whole poem you really manged to pull the reader in. I loved reading your poem. I thought it was amazing!
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