Thursday, May 1, 2008

My Love by Madeline D.

We have been together for a while
You always have a way of making me smile
I love to hug you, I love to kiss you
Hold me in your arms and never let go
Let’s let our love for each other show
You are you
And I am me
But we go together like peanut butter and jelly

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

girlllll your poem was fineeeeeeee. i could tell that the audience was intended to be someone special (like me). the mood was very happy and loving. and i think the underlying meaning was just about how much you love me =) goood job!

Anonymous said...

Yoooo madaline your poem was money. It reminds me of when me and you dated a long time ago. It probably was about our relationship I think. Just kidding, but yeah it was good the theme was good. It was good. Im nasty at halo I just moved up to a 32 by the way. Yeah but great poem your rights were cash and I thought it was all around dope as hell.

Anonymous said...

Madeline
Your poem was aweosome. I assume its about your boyfriend :] I think thats really cute. I love the diction or word choice you used. My favorite line is the last one where you said, " we go together like peanut butter and jelly." I loved the feeling of your poem and I enjoyed reading it. Good Job girlll!