There once was a man from South Hadley Who debated the staff quite madly He is an ex-marine Who has a lovely dream To rid the democrats of South Hadley
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This was a good poem. I liked how he dislikes Democrats because I do too. I don't know what your theme was but I thought that it was against Democrats. Good job.
This poem has a good rhyme scheme along with a good syllable pattern. the perosn speaking is a stubborn, streotpical rebublican and the audience are democrats. the theme is that there isnt anything good about south hadley. cya corey. i dont really like this poem.
What was good about this poem was the rhyme scheme. The person speaking in this poem was obviously a republican because they disliked democrats. I'm not really sure what the theme was but i think the overall meaning is how he doesn't like democrats.
The speaker of the poem is an awesome republican joe. the audience is chaput. The words are abouta man. The theme is democrats are awful joe, and this is an awesome poem.
Corey i thought you poem was a little different but it was very good. it seemed as though you knew a lot about your subject and made the poem quite funny. one thing i liked about your poem was that it rhymed and flowed very nicely. even though i did not really get the point of the poem i thought it was very good.
“Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.”
- Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
5 comments:
This was a good poem. I liked how he dislikes Democrats because I do too. I don't know what your theme was but I thought that it was against Democrats. Good job.
This poem has a good rhyme scheme along with a good syllable pattern. the perosn speaking is a stubborn, streotpical rebublican and the audience are democrats. the theme is that there isnt anything good about south hadley. cya corey. i dont really like this poem.
What was good about this poem was the rhyme scheme. The person speaking in this poem was obviously a republican because they disliked democrats. I'm not really sure what the theme was but i think the overall meaning is how he doesn't like democrats.
The speaker of the poem is an awesome republican joe. the audience is chaput. The words are abouta man. The theme is democrats are awful joe, and this is an awesome poem.
Corey i thought you poem was a little different but it was very good. it seemed as though you knew a lot about your subject and made the poem quite funny. one thing i liked about your poem was that it rhymed and flowed very nicely. even though i did not really get the point of the poem i thought it was very good.
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