Thursday, May 1, 2008

Chaput by Corey C.

There once was a man from South Hadley
Who debated the staff quite madly
He is an ex-marine
Who has a lovely dream
To rid the democrats of South Hadley

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

This was a good poem. I liked how he dislikes Democrats because I do too. I don't know what your theme was but I thought that it was against Democrats. Good job.

Anonymous said...

This poem has a good rhyme scheme along with a good syllable pattern. the perosn speaking is a stubborn, streotpical rebublican and the audience are democrats. the theme is that there isnt anything good about south hadley. cya corey. i dont really like this poem.

Anonymous said...

What was good about this poem was the rhyme scheme. The person speaking in this poem was obviously a republican because they disliked democrats. I'm not really sure what the theme was but i think the overall meaning is how he doesn't like democrats.

Anonymous said...

The speaker of the poem is an awesome republican joe. the audience is chaput. The words are abouta man. The theme is democrats are awful joe, and this is an awesome poem.

Anonymous said...

Corey i thought you poem was a little different but it was very good. it seemed as though you knew a lot about your subject and made the poem quite funny. one thing i liked about your poem was that it rhymed and flowed very nicely. even though i did not really get the point of the poem i thought it was very good.