Life is life unscripted.
It’s a wonderful thing.
It’s singing along to a song not sung.
And wearing the shiniest bling.
It’s taking a walk on the beach
With no one but the sea gulls.
Or learning how to teach
A new trick to your beagle.
It’s watching the sun forever rise
Ov’r the tops of the mountains.
And taking a bath
In New York’s finest fountains.
Life is life unscripted.
Life is life encrypted.
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4 comments:
wessy
i think your poem was fantab. i think the audience was to anyone who is trying to lead the perfect life because nobody can do that. i loved your unique diction and you had a great perspective. this was one of the strongest poems of the class. keep up the good work!
hi boyfriend, i think your poem is amazing. I think the underlying meaning is that your life is not written out yet so you have to experience things and write out your own story and it can range from simple everyday things to stuff that happen rarely. The mood is happy and anxious.
Wes, your poem is wicked good. I really liked it. The theme of your poem is life and how it's not written out, it just happens. This poem is a Shakespearean sonnet. the underlying meaning is like the theme. Your poem is expressing everything that can happen in a persons life.
W3s,
I really like your poem, it seemed really professional. Your theme seesm to be that life is different than we think it to be. It was a very strong poem.
I likey u poem.
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