Thursday, January 31, 2008

Our Family Story by Martha H


I remember it very clearly, February 2nd. The day it was over. It was everything we worked for, everything we deserved, everything we thought about for sixty days straight. It never left our mind, not for a second. And the thought of that final victory teased and taunted us everyday. Every wall, every pushup, every lay up and sprint made our dream a small step closer to achieving. And in thirty-two minutes it ended. Thirty-two minutes of the hundreds of hours we worked. Barely a half hour time span and in a dramatic way, our lives had ended.

November 10th, we began to experience hell. Excited and nervous, we were blindsided about what we were about to endure. Four hours seemed like a short enough time for us. Little did we know that with in those hours, we would push our bodies to a limit we didn’t know existed. The first two hours was straight conditioning, this was to be expected. I laugh now when I think of how naïve we players were. The few sprints we were expecting never occurred. And the reality of the fifty walls of consecutive sprints didn’t hit me until I was dry heaving on the side lines with every other guy in the gym.

From day one coach called us a family. And a family does everything together and finishes everything they start. Nine guys hadn’t completed the sprinting drill. So being the family that we were, we did the drill until every single person finished it. I ran over two hundred walls that day, and my assumable “excellent physical shape” didn’t give me an advantage. The last two hours were skill drills. Whether we were sprinting full court lay-ups or sprinting ball handling drills, our legs never stopped moving. After finishing up with a two mile run, day one of our five day try outs had ended.

It was hard to believe that our first day would be the easiest of the five but as we soon discovered, it seemed like a breeze compared to the others. Not only was each try out harder in skill and speed, but the more our mind told our muscles to give up, the harder it was to ignore. But soon enough our hell week was over, and practice began. Things were predicted to ease up since try outs were over but we learned very early to expect the unexpected. Practice had slowly become our daily rituals and occurred everyday until the games began.

Coach had promised that we would be ready for our first game and he hadn’t been kidding. We read, visualized, and wrote our plays down ten times a day and with the penalty of running five suicides for every mistake, no one forgot what to do after the second day of reviewing. Our first game was a rigorous game but in the end we had won.

The congratulation came short and was completely forgotten the next day at practice, but the mistakes we had made throughout the game were not. We worked and perfected and soon enough, it was time for our next game.

The games continued as the season crept on and before we knew it, playoffs began. It was unheard of that our town team wouldn’t make playoffs and with a recent state champ’s record, we had a lot to live up to. Other teams should’ve been intimidated but since we lost eight seniors last year; they expected us to be rookies. We were reminded that everyday and we fed on it to reenergize us. Playoffs had begun and we were ready. Slowly but steadily we continued to win our games. Eventually we found ourselves in the division finals.

The game was against the team we had beat in our first game. They underestimated us and losing was infuriating for them. They were hyped up and ready to play, but so were we. The game was unbelievably even, we scored and they followed in suit. But with three minutes left, the two point game we had since the start had ended and we pulled away with the win. I’ve never felt so accomplished before that moment, but we knew that it wasn’t over yet.

State Championships, here we come. The two hour drive didn’t stop the town from coming to support us. We stepped on the court and the crowd went crazy. The crowd, the feelings, the excitement began to fad once tip off began. We were caught off guard like coach had expected. The excitements of our past wins were over and the only thing that mattered now was this one game. By halftime opposing team held the lead by eighteen. Fretting the yelling and infuriation of the coach, we ran into the locker room.

But he didn’t yell or scream. He didn’t throw his clip board or get in our faces. He asked us what had happened in that first half. Where are the heart had gone, and motivation and courage and strength and why had it left? We knew we hadn’t worked this hard to come in this gym and get dominated and we were ready to change that. Second half was different, we came out strong.

The fight was difficult but with thirty seconds left, we were down by two.

Sprinting down the court to try and get one last shot, we had the confidence we could do it. We weren’t fast enough. Time ran out, we had lost. But none of that mattered. What mattered was how we got there and what it took, what mattered was how our family pulled together and didn’t give up. We lost but in our own way, we won a lot more. We would be back next year and knew exactly what we’d needed to do. February 2nd was over, but in a way it was just the start.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Martha-
I really enjoyed reading your story. I thought that is was a very good description of how much it takes for a team nto come together and win a championship.
I think that part that really stood out to me was when you were describing the drills and how every member of the team had to finish before the team could stop. I liked how you didn't have a main character, the main character was the team. I liked how the progress of the team came as a whole.
I think that the best part about this story was the structure of the story. I thinlkl that the way that you wrote as sort of a timeline without dates was good.
I really enjoyed reading your story.

Anonymous said...

wow, martha. great story. i could really connect with this story because i play basketball and had to experience the difficult tryouts. this story made me think about where i will be in 3 years.

the character didnt really change too much. his opinions on basketball practice changed; he thought it would get easier but found out he was wrong. the story arc really depended on the character's personality, because if he had quitted, then the story would have no point.

my favorite part of the story was when the main character described the feeling of walking on to a court that was two hours away from home, yet there were still all of his teams fans there. this was in the rising action. "State Championships, here we come. The two hour drive didn’t stop the town from coming to support us. We stepped on the court and the crowd went crazy. The crowd, the feelings, the excitement began to fad once tip off began." i liked this quote because i felt a connection between these players.

i think the best quality of this piece of writing you created was the story arc. i liked how you explained how the team began in tryouts, and kept working hard throughout the season, but didnt win it all.

next time, martha, try not to exxagerate too much. in my trouts, we did not have to run 50 straight walls and end with a two mile run. but still, it all worked great.

Anonymous said...

i really enjoyed this story a lot. you did a great job showing the reader what it was like to go through try outs.

the part i liked the most was try outs. those are always the worst part of every season and i could tell they were no different for this. i liked the idea that the team is a family because if everyone doesn't help each other the team would never accomplish anything.

Anonymous said...

Martha,
Your story was amazing! I loved it and didn’t want to stop reading. I thought it was very realistic and could easily connect to it. It made me think about our basketball team. I thought you did a very good job getting into character. It was so detailed that I basically would have assumed you were a player on this team. Your knowledge of basketball, and how a team bonds, definitely added to the story. The main character clearly changes from a naive individual, to a teammate with a lot of heart. My favorite part of the story was when you described tryouts. I liked when you said, “the more our mind told our muscles to give up, the harder it was to ignore.” I could really relate to that and I knew exactly what you were trying to say. I think description was the story’s overall strength. Maybe next time you could add more dialogue. Something I liked was how the ending wasn’t a typical happy ending. That really added to the realistic-ness of the whole thing. I loved your story marth!

Anonymous said...

I really liked the story Martha, expecially because I experienced everything with you. It made me think of all the hard work and struggles we went through throughout the season. I could image every time we ran and every wall and lap we sprinted through. I think the character changed because she didnt expect basketball to be so hard and how much of a family we all became. it definitly shows growth of the character.I loved the part at the end when you said it didnt matter that you didnt win, only that you had come so far. "What mattered was how we got there and what it took, what mattered was how our family pulled together and didn’t give up. We lost but in our own way, we won a lot more." I love this quote. the best part of this short story is how much the reader feels apart of the experience. It was very detailed and I loved it. One thing i would've changed was to be more detailed and focused in on the championship game. Other then that, great job martha!

Anonymous said...

martha,
Your story was very good. you used great detail and very good word usage. I think you made a good point on how a team has to come together to win a championship game. I liked how you talked about the practices and how you didnt really have a main character it was just the team. That was different in a good way. your whole story was great martha and i really enjoyed reading it.

Anonymous said...

Hey Martha,
This story makes me look back on our season so much, and it was really well written. When I read this, all I could picture was our two teams.
Though there is not really a true main character in your story, I believe that they stay the same. The team keeps working for that one goal of winning, but from that they know they've worked hard.
I really can't say that I have a favorite part of this story because the whole thing is so good!The way you wrote it too was very creative. Almost like a timeline like Katie said, but without distinct dates. This story was amazing Martha, amazing job!

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